It's too repetitive.
It's too much about this and not enough about that.
It's too positive.
It's not sophisticated enough.
It's not interesting enough.
It's not smart enough.
No one will read it.
No one will listen to it.
No one will watch it.
That's what most people are going to say.
But even more importantly, that's probably what you're going to tell yourself.
Which will ultimately hold you back.
Which doesn't make a lot of sense.
Because most people don't even know about you.
And when most people don't even know about you, then there's really no need to worry about them or what they think about you.
You can worry about most people once they know about you.
And once you're at that point where most people know about you, then there's really no need to worry about them anymore (or anybody else as a matter of fact)...